|Reviews for 15|
| White Tea and Ginger 11/29/05 . chapter 1
Another beautiful the peice. The words and imagery are just gorgeous.
| simpleplan13 11/22/05 . chapter 1
i like this a lot.. great job
| Ilium 11/18/05 . chapter 1
I like the introduction of the idea of the sand in the glass made by sand. It's a really interesting aspect that really could be a whole new poem by itself. I also like the use of red and grey, rather than red and black or black and white or some such. It's more appropriate than an age old cliché and because it's just a little bit different the reader pays attention. Nice!