This is incredible writing, you add detail and sympathy to what could be just a bunch of social stereotypes. I hope there's more.

This is a brilliant story. I love how all the chapters coincide but also have a strong individuality about them. You have excellent style and I hope that you'll update soon!

Ah, God, that was beautiful. You are brilliant at this stream-of-consciousness style of writing, and you pull it off so well here.

My one complaint is that in some of the chapters, the formatting makes it hard to read: but if you can struggle through it it does add to the stream-of-consciousness style, it's just that it hurt my eyes!

Another wonderful chapter. I really like how detailed you are with your characters but don't overcomplicate your writing style with it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I actually really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens to all these incrediably developed characters by countdown. Please update soon!

I have to say, I'm impressed. Few stories can keep my attention for more than 6.2 seconds, but this did.

Especially the blend of characters and their different backgrounds, despite the fact that they're all in the same place together. I applaud you, good sir. Keep up the good work.

very nice... although it is kinda difficult to read since its just this huge chunk of writting. i know its the style you want to use but maybe cut it into half? so i dont end up crosseyed?? hehe anyway, this chapter doesnt dissapoint, never heard of a Harvey Wallbanger or a Honey Vodka.. makes this all the more mysterious. good stuff. keep it up. -the Lady Elaine

i liked the concept behind this. i hope you add more chapters because this story was brilliant. i really enjoyed it; the Seven and Seven character is so wonderful to hate and pity all at once and you've managed to bring it across well. very well told! keep it going, i'll be checking back. - the Lady Elaine