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| eraced 2006-09-27 ch 1,  | abusei love the way you write. your very talented. keep writing. dead and buried. ~erAced~ |
| Mage Dudette 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abusei love how this flows, it really works well. go you! |
| XxVendettxX 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abusethe poem has a musical quality to it that is nice on the ear, a quality that many rhyming poems lack because their rhymes seem forced and awkward. This is not so with this poem, it runs smoothly and elegantly, with nice use of repitition. |