yay you're writing an epic... cool. bloody good start, i enjoyed that! imaginative and vivid!

cheers for the review, floyds exact msg is in a poem of mine... pretty obvious which one. lol (and did u really want to print my ode?)

yeah treasure that houdini poem! serves as lovely testimony to how you'll remeber him.

oh my gosh, that was awesome! you've got a whole story just waiting to jump free! it didn't always rhyme, but the flow was perfect.

Creepy, keeps you on your toes, interesting. Keeps attention extremely well. Fine, very fine. Congrats on a great piece