|Reviews for Slanted Rain|
| naughtgreen 11/19/05 . chapter 1
Opposite sides of the dock, like those junior high dances where the boys are on one side and the girls on the other, or it used to be like that. Now everybody is grinding all over the place and getting as horny as hell. Even so young.
| breezy nostrils 11/19/05 . chapter 1
The title is really eye-catching...and the poem is good too. Creative as usual. Nice work!
| not sure yet 11/19/05 . chapter 1
rhyme rhyme, muchly nice little poem here, i like
| T. Rowland 11/19/05 . chapter 1
the title is lovely... you are very talented. agreed with the previous review, the contrast is very interesting. powerful and beautiful.
| Relayer 11/19/05 . chapter 1
The last line creates a real sense of distance although the rest of the poem is quite intimate... it's an interesting contrast, which I am yet to grasp completely.
| classic violet 11/19/05 . chapter 1
Amazing job. I love the title. It's so vivid and... real.
| lighting candles 11/19/05 . chapter 1
beautifully done. like the writer before this, i think it's something everyone can relate to; your use of the abstract&metaphors are also done well.
| Fabian Cortez 11/19/05 . chapter 1
I can picture the whole thing. I think we've all been there at one time or another, even if we don't like to think about it or admit it.
Beautifully captured and atmospheric writing.