hey, Joana!!

This poem was really awesome. I can really relate to it, I know what its like to have someone you love leave, but you always gotta keep going forward, which is what i did. I won't waste me life -- im gonna keep going forward. You really expressed it well in this, and i really liked it! You can say so much in such little words. ITs awesome! You're an awesome writer! okies well im talkin to you now so0o toodles!!

heya sis. very nice..i feel like this a lot...*nods* great poem...so true most of the time...you really are a great poet. *grins* write more

Hi. it is I. Shadray. I liked the poem a lot, for it tells just how much it hurts when someone leaves your life and you have to overcome the loss of a friend, family member, lover, or anything else. I think I understand deeply every word and phrase in this poem, and what I liked most about it was at the end, when the other character tells the speaker that he's still there, still with her, forever to dwell. I think you are a great poet, and the endings to all of your poems always change them from "good" to superb. Keep it up.

Your lost friend,Me.