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| Montrasaur 2005-12-25 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed reading your poem. Stuff like this is worthy of the anthology I'm writing. Interested, then check my profile for more details. |
| SoonToBeMe 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI love how many ways I can imagine what this poem is really talking about (more specifically than finding peace). Works that talk about things such as finding peace and escaping pain really apply to everyone and that's what makes this poem great. That and the beautiful imagery and word choice. "Home sweet- So bitter sweet home". You knew that was an awesome line as soon as you typed it didn't you? It's a great feeling. This is one of my favorite poems on fiction press. Great job! Also, thanks for your review of my poem Lethal Injection. |
| star-wars-rocks 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abusei like the imagry that's created, about the road to peace. |
| Changethesubject 2005-12-05 ch 1, | abuseits beautiful, well written, well expressed. lovely work. |
| Silence the Storm 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Great work. |
| les petits bateaux 2005-12-03 ch 1, | abuseSimply beautiful. The string of words intertwined with heartfelt emotion is daring, yet, soft. Good job. ~~Trinity |
| I.K.Seraphina 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, it has a lot of feeling in it. |
| Lonely Forest 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuse"Home sweet-So bitter sweet home" Love this line. Good job. And thanks for your review of my sotry :"After Dark" |
| alivewithlove13 2005-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is beautiful good job! |
| inkfish 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseman i love it! im a grammer freak: "I will ripe it out" take the "e" off of rip. it sounds like you want to ripen your heart. great job! the ending is perfect |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseHeartfelt and honest; I loved the mood that you created in this. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |