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Reviews For: The Star

t-t-t-ouch.
2007-08-15
ch 1,
I've been reading your stories and I must say I love the way you describe everything with such great detail. I especially love the business type man. I thought he was a great addition to the story. Good work!
you'll see
2007-02-04
ch 1,
"No other star did was as bright as this one." It looks like you changed someting without fixing the rest of the sentence.
Interesting.
childoftherose
2005-11-20
ch 1,
I love this story
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