Hi, your stories are really great!
Are you going to finish this one?

I really liked this story too! Damnit, you are a fabulous writer and I wanna know what happens next! Pretty please!?!

Luv, I-B-Y-F, x

heya. Nice beginning, never mind I sort of got bored halfway through. You tend to run on on abstract points a lot. I jsut thought i should mention it. At least have him do something while he's introspecting. Interesting prologue I must say.

... well now I know which journal he is missing...

This reminds me of a movie I once saw. A Night With the King. It's hilarious because esther (the original) was going to marry a king and she was all teary and "oh woes, i miss my pappy" while this guy who liked her was making a much lesser deal over the fact that he was missing his dick. They made him a eunech *snip*. I'm starting to think that the story of esther is much less enthralling than this boy's tragedy. They had one of those teeny boppers playing her too.

This is very good! I hope that more chapters will come! (You could be like me and only update when you remember...like every 6 months...)

*sighs* oh, you just love to drive me to distraction. What ever shall I do! *tut tut* you meanie. *smiles mischeviously* i think I shall hack into your file and change the storyline. No...that wouldn't be nice now would it. Besides, I wouldn't do that to you now, would I.

You updated. What a wonder!

Now

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the next chapter.

Fæmen is SO dead XD "Sissa"? I would kill him. Actually, no, I would probably say something like "Yes, Fabian, that's absolutely right" just to see if he noticed his own name being butchered.

And then I would scream at him.

Sisbia is so much more patient than I. (or do you say more patient than 'me'? Me, I, same difference. Whatever. ^^;;)

I guess it's just as well that Sisbia is so patient. I think somebody else might have strangled Fæmen in his sleep. XD

If you ever want more fanart, just drop me a line. I love this story. ^_^

I like his name. And the way this was written. It's - uh - very interesting. He's dark to say the least. I feel sorry for him. I wish he could be healed from his insanity.

As for my own story Frenn, you have given me the interest of continuing it again. I had started Chapter four, but we bought a new computer and I lost all my writings.

I'm almost afraid to continue reading this story. I don't do well with sad. *That's an understatment, so you know.*

Thanks for reading my writings and reviewing them.

Arulia Senshade

If you want to write het, write het. If you want to write slash with a viable arranged marriage situation, there either needs to be a mix-up with the gender of the "bride", or you have to come up with a society lacking the same gander roles the current western society has. Forcing one of the males to be in the role of a woman with no explanation (in a society where it seems same-sex marriage is as accepted as het marriage) does not make sense. Furthermore, you always need a man and a woman to make a baby. An arranged marriage between two men should not have the ultimate goal of producing children. It defeats the whole purpose of writing slash if one half of the couple is for all intents and purposes a girl with a **. You really need to step back and ask yourself why you're even bothering to write slash.

I love your story. Really orignal. Write more!

my my...updating i see.

hey...you updated...so did I.

I love this story. It's fantasy, but somehow so real and I just like that it's different. Or at least, different from anything I've read before.

=) Mandraco.

Hey you git! JK...*giggles* I updated Silver Tears. I think you'll like it. It's somewhat lengthy...I think and uhm...It's not a filler. So. That should put you in a good mood...