Haha. She just had to re-meet the guy. I still can't believe he saw her confused between the bins and without a bra. Wow. I do stuff like that too.. when I go out to throw something out, or to the car at night when I think no one's there. I've always been right in my assuming but now.. this scares me a bit.

Anyway.. I love the way this is written. You know as a letter to her Nono.. I mean, Nana. BUT.. (I know the but always sucks Haha) I'm just wondering.. would she want to know this much about her life. It's a little weird that she's telling her EVERY detail. Unless, she's used to it or something. Who knows? I just find it a little weird.

But I digress (which I do a lot just like Ai), I really like how you hook us right in.. You know, everyone's just wondering what made her have this change? From being like those girls in the mall.. to her silent, crazy self. And why did she move to her sister's house. Plus.. what IS the story of their names. I mean, Ai Fatima, Japanese and Muslim. Those are really different names. Haha. And who is this guy? I definitely want to find out so I'll keep reading. =]

So... It definitely took me far too long to read and review this chapter. I figured I might as well do it now, since you also have a new Wonderwall chapter, and I'd feel really guilty if I read that before reading this (since I've only had about 6 months). It's probably a good thing you don't update your stories more often, or I'd spend too much time reading them. =P (Not that they don't deserve the time.)

I'm not sure what to say about the actual chapter. I forget a lot about the characters/situation, so I'll have to go back and reread the first chapter again sometime (I reread parts of it while reading the second), but I remembered enough to get me through it without being entirely confused. ^^ I enjoyed the development of the plot, as well as of Ai, and really want to read more. That's pretty much it. (I know--That whole comment, and that's all I had to say about the chapter itself. You'll have to forgive me. *cute smile*)

P.S. "A blubbery gooky goo so gooky and gooey that I’ve lost the will feign apathy." =P I love that line (mainly the part about losing the will to feign apathy).

This story is odd, but strangely fun to read.

This is really fun to read. I want to know more about Ai, and why she's living with her sisters...what caused her to change from blonde-crombi clone to...whatever she is now. Yeah. I suck at reviews...so just, write more ^_^.

~Linux

Fun times! Ai made me actually laugh (which I try not to do as laughing at my computor makes me seem a little creepy). I love the way the letters bounce around with her thought process, lets face it, thats the way humans think. I must admit though, I did get a little confused with the unlabled diologue with the unsaid thoughts mushed in there too. I think though that I just need more practice reading it. And just a question- the chapters seem to say each is a separate letter, but there is no "Dear Nana" in the beginning or anything, and no closing at the end...

That was cute! Ai sounds adorable. I can't wait to read updates!

Pax,Julia

MUWAHAHAHAHAHA! I loves it xD

that so made my day xD

sorry it took so long to review, but I got grounded which equates to no internet x_X;

but I likes it, I likes it lots xD and I actually started giggling and clapping. very good. I quite like this story. quite lots. lots and lots. yes. ok. so I'm done now. Update one of the stories soon!

~YGP aka Krista~

It's been way too long sense I read a non-slash story online. I usually reserve non-slash romance to published books, but I'm definetly sticking to this one. It's very amusing, and the main character is just insane enough. I also love how you chose to write it, as a letter to Nana. I can't wait to see more, because there are so many things still in the dark.

Another really great story. I almost peed myself I laughed so hard!! ^ ^ I really realy really luved it! Ai is so hilarious and cute and adorable at the same time! I can't wait to find out who mystery-man is and what the heck he is doing outside and staring at brawless sockless girls! And sliding on waxed wooden floors is extremely fun, as is sliding down banisters. That was a really adorable part. Ok, enough raving and worshiping you. Ttyl

lmao. very, very random. loved the last bit! ahahah guy seems a little snobbish tho... but i can't judge, hez notm mine. can't wait to read more!

Hehe, I feel special. :D

(To self: The reviews worked. *insert evil cackle here*)

*ahem*

I like this story too! I love the weird parents thing, and the whole naming process.

I did at first, back when I was twelve, when she first entered the business right out of college. I remember being all like, “Holy crap! Please introduce me to Aaron Carter or I’ll die. I’ll just die!”

That's hilarious! It's so 13 years old! It's like hahaha, Aaron Carter? Wtf?

But anyway, keep updating! :D

~MD

freaking awesome!

I liked the story, it's really interesting. I like that it's written as a letter, I think it gives good insight into Ai's character. I want to read more! (But update Wrong Way first. ^_^)

"Zombie roadkill!" - hilarious

Nice style!! I like it.

So funny, and so true!!

Hahaha.

Really long though, wow!!

Great story, update soon!!

;-D

Hello, there, spacebunny. Just something off the top of my mind, but, this chapter sounds like stream of conscious to me. Was that how it was? Because every other paragraph had a different...theme, I suppose? It was all very confusing but very funny. You're sense of humor is quite interesting. And I love the sliding on the floor part, and the no bra part, those were my favorite. It sounded like their parents got their names straight from babynames, y'know? Love that website. (laughs) Ah, well, I liked this chapter, but at times I found it a bit too long or repetitive. Mayhaps you could fix it? Mayhaps, even though I'm not giving you certain examples because I don't want to screw you up. (smiles) TA TA - Aysel