yay i luv it... but UPDATE DAMMIT!

O I love the internal dialogue awesomeness Zoey is a great character, all the personalities are very well done i must say... oh yes.. well yes i SUBMITTED A REVIEW even though every chapter i LOVE well this one i liked the head stuff.. yea... write more if you get time!!

WOW Me like. Love the ending... it's so... awesome! Seriously! Keep writing! Dunno what else to write, because it would take too long to list all the awesome aspects of the story, and the chapter, so yea. KEEP WRITING!

I think my favorite part about this is how the characters and/or emotions are all so easy to indentify with/realistic. Those are the best sort of stories. :)

-Sally Can Wait

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! AHAHAHAHA!! That's my retarded laughing while reading this chapter. Ah...I'm such a loser...and I'm not lying, I was laughing out loud like an idiot. I don't know how you do it...I really don't, it's just so damn good! If you don't become a writer in the future, I will come to Victoria and I will CUT YOU. :| That right, I'll do it! Anyways, I'm gonna keep on going with the praise cause people don't give long enough reviews!! One line is not enough people!! She gave you a WHOLE CHAPTER! It takes a lot of work to write good stuff like this! So yeah, this chapter just confirmed that Joey and Jake are my favorite characters, and now they're going to be a couple, it's perfect! Though I do sense drama in the future, oh yes. Sascha Wong can't write a story that goes all nicely and everyone's happy, oh no. I see you're mind!! Ahahahaha, me so crazy. I bet I'll be completely wrong, I ALWAYS am. Oh, and I love you're ending, one word says it all. I'm trying hard to think of something critical to say...but I'm sorry Sascha I just CAN'T DO IT. That's like you trying to find something critical to say about AAR! It's just not possible! (well...besides making fun of GayLOR). So you're just gonna have to take that praise, take it I tell you, TAKE IT. I'm sorry this review isn't as good as the last one...I've been out of school for to long. I'm even too lazy to proof read...any spelling errors are not my fault, (teehee, I almost wrote speel.)Hey...hey Sascha...You're nose.Frobagg out

aw. so cute. i just love this story so much! Please update soon!:) It's too cute and mushy!

He laughed indeed. But, you know, they say laughter is the best medicine... 6th time's a charm. Tastefully engaging as always and a pleasure to read. It... it makes you want to read... more... Love it.

ok..so i've been pestering you about a new chapter and u've finally got it up! oh yes...and well..first date! how exciting is that?! now i want to read the next chapter to see how the date would go...horribly wrong or awesome? either way..good stuff goo stuff..oh and remember to write Mia in more, after all...she's an awesome friend! u better find time in between you job to write.i don't care how tired you are. love u!

she gets it now! finally!

Hey...so far i'm likin it. I Like the whole msn thing, makes it seem more believable (not sure if i spelt that right). I love all the ahem...subtle references. I have a suggestion..could u perhaps have sayid somehow fall off a building along with nell? I think that'd be a great twist..lol..jk. Anyways, i'll just say this once...get the next chapter done soon..cuz i wanna read it (k now i won't bug u about it).

yay! ok, ok first off...(8) false conversation! hidden agenda! you think we're stupid, how dare you! (8)(those are supposed to be music notes...) ahaha, good times, good times. Ok...so my favorite character (besides Alana for course..teehee) would have to be Zoey, and I'm not just saying that cause she's the main character! I like how honest she is, and how she's really not afraid to express her opinion. The only time she doesn't is when she's not sure about something, which makes her an even more realistic character. So yeah, Zoey's awesome. I also like Jake, i dunno why...you really don't get to know what he's thinking which makes him a really interesting character. You have to keep guessign what's on him mind. He also has awesome shoes, lol. So yeah, those are my two top. Moving on...i loved how you started this chapter, with the yellow nailpolish and hole in the sock, it was a very realistic image. It also made be laugh cause im wearing green nail polish on my toes right now! So yeah, my biggest comment on you're story would be that I love how realistic it is. One of the big reasons why i don't read teen fiction ( except for my guilty pleasure that only you know about :|) is because it always seems so fake and all like "ohh my life sucks, that guy doesn't like me, boohoo." But you're story isn't like that at all, it takes all the bad parts about being a teenager and everything, but doesn't over dramatize it or anything. I so honest and true, you can tell that you're not trying to hard to get the reader to sympatize with your characters, but at the same time, you get sympathy from it's pure honesty, without forcing it down the readers throat. Whoa, i think im getting a little too technical here, this is what happens when you take creative writting! Well, i think this review is long enough, so no crazy stories this time! It's a shame too, cause i have plenty from seattle, *shakes head*. So yeah, the story rocks and you're an awesome writter, keep it up. (p.s., sorry if there are errors or some of this doesn't make sense, im too lazy to proof-read)- frobagg out!

Duh duh duh *insert dramatic music here*

Nice chapter! I like how the suspense is like kind of hanging there - what will Jake do?!?! Who knows! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Damn! really nice, i like the idea of putting text convos in there, makes it seem more realistic, tho Jake isnt an... ALL AMERICAN BOY.. wo concert time soon, keep writing!! lol your awesome!

aww, update soon:) love this

this is ross again... and iam GABE! ROFL!. So ya... long awaited is this chapter in my mind. Way to go sash, another wonderful piece of work. Stunning dear, absolutely stunning *add in corny british accent*. SO... i cant wait for the her answer... exciting!. Thanks sascha, another thing to make me wait for :(oh well... i like how the cast has narrowed a bitit was kind of big, and now its a bit more cenrealized, i like that... so kudos... can i suggest something?ok... i liked the msn convo thing... but dont repeat it... it was weird to read loli think cause i was on msn at the timeand it was almost like a real one.so ya... more praise to this writer comes!