Very good so far. I love romance. When u update I will review it. It's very good and I look forward to reading it to the very end.

please contuine this story i really like it

I like the story line and i hope to be able to read more soon.

It was very good!

Awesome so far! I love the mysterious air of this. Very captivating. I hope you update soon!

whoa, nice story! i love how mysterious this is! update soon!

I must say, I highly enjoyed reading these first two chapters. Your description and detail is well executed, though at times (and it is rare) it becomes long winded, causing me to scan over the paragraph, something I hate to do. :) I am as of yet, not sure where you are going with the plot, but I have a feeling that it won't take much longer. You kept Emilie's personality together as well as Cesar's...I've seen stories (I've written a few :) ) where the character becomes OOC from what was originally written...it's a burden of the author, especially when writing such a detailed story, just becareful of that...it can ruin the best of tales, and what you have here has a shining possiblity of being something great. Hurry with the plot twist though, as you can lose readers this way...but don't worry...I'll eagerly await the next chapter. :) Oh, and please tell more about the Marquis...he's such an enigma...I like it. :)