This could mean something different to so many people. Room for interpretation. And curiosity, a lot of it! Good job.

This was an interesting piece. Nice work.

Very lovely. Has a White-Rabbit sort of feel, but the ending seems too exact. Too complete. I know that sounds weird...but it had a hazy, not-quite-there feel to it up till the end.

Yeah this has a hazy feel to where it was enticing and spacey until the end.

it was really, like...THERE. if you get what i mean. not as much imagery as being there, blind...sorta...