What a piece of work is man and how close the proximity of pain and pleasure; bleak, brutal and almost thrillingly violent.

Really how do you write such amazing poemsthis is really bloody goode

wow.. very powerful and well done... the ending especially

That was deep. I really liked it.adn I thank you for reviewing to mine. *mummbles* although it wasn't my best work.

edgy - loved it!

Great poem very "SinCity", so yeah its a bit Frank Miller.

Best bit for me is

"When I finally see

One of his teeth

Fly into the air

With gouts of

Blood colouring

The already

** up rain

I act"

Great Stuff!