...that was very arrogant of you... I still liked it, you captured my emotions, you know the ones I feel about the ** that break up with me. But atleast we'll always have each other. ** what the others say, why the hell does everyone have to be so ** stupid. They don't understand a thing about PMS (** man syndrome) I love that hate!! I love it!! More hate!! more hate!! Write more!!

is it a rap song? *poke poke*

wow...Lots of anger. Not my type of poetry, but hey, I guess it still counts. Well written. lol ^^

independency? hm...this really makes you sound abusive. i hope she stays away from you forever! "** that **" i've only ever heard idiots say that ;D i hope you were just playing with this song...if so, you've captured something here...something i think is wrong with our culture. just b/c she'd independent doesn't make her a **...i wonder what she really did to you.