"Oris: Ok. I’m just going to go play with myself now."

I so love that line. And I'm sure I'll be quoting a few more of them too as I go. Most of which you'll recognize as my faves from before... but yeah... they bear repeating. :D

"Besides, it’s not as if he ever liked you anyway. If he did, it would be Romeo and Rosaline, not Romeo and Juliet."

Hehe. I'll never get over that. Love it.

"Oris (does an obscene gesture) Oh, ** you, you cuntless tart, you **-headed twig, you…

Grey Lady (off-stage, dispassionately, as Oris continues to swear soundlessly) Six hours later…

Oris: … shlyuha, konoyaru, suka, blyad’"

heheheheBTW... I meant to ask you... what do the last parts there mean?~_~o

And the thumbs up was too perfect.

:pouncie glomps Oris:

I really do need to finish coloring that sketch of him you did. :D

Overall commentary... nice and simple. A two person cast, where only one person is on stage for the majority of it? Nice. Not so easy to pull off and still be interesting, but you did it very nicely. You definitely need to check with some local theater companies about 'one act nights' and such... get this performed. Heck... I know some pro actors that just moved to your area. I could probably get ya'll in contact... and yeah, this isn't the place to be discussing it...

It was fabulicious! Fabuloso, even!Congrats!