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| Gagging Angel 2005-11-24 ch 3, | When I started reading definations I almost gave this up as a lost cause. But I read on, and was rather impressed. All the key points come out well and succinctly. And to top it all off, the work as a whole seems quite sensical. |
| No Trust 2005-11-21 ch 1, | Ironically pragmatism is, like every other philosophical persuasion, useful for nothing more than intellectual masturbation. |
| Formerly 2005-11-20 ch 3, | Oh, man. You didn't misspell the title, did you? |
| Typewriter King 2005-11-20 ch 3, | On point IV of chapter I, I think you meant to say “ensue” rather than “ensure” at on point. Philosophically, you have this refined pretty well. However, there is a weakness in your definition of evil. As you have it written, it would either become void for vagueness, or possibly give rise to a dystopia in much the same way that state communism did. By defining evil as anything that could hinder the ideal state (or absolute communism), you give enough room for a state morality police to be legitimately formed. Besides that, I think you've got it! |
| Le Creature 2005-11-20 ch 1, | Unfortunately, fictionpress ate all of my brackets. If a sentence doesn't make sense, then the brackets were probably removed erroneously by fictionpress. I will try to find a way to remedy this, in the mean time if something doesn't make sense, try to add brackets around one clause. |