...sannachi1... XD that's funny... neways... u've so never been drunk... so i think this is weird... unless ur trying 2 tell me u've been drunk...!

-YuLian

Yikes. I've never been drunk before, but this story reminds me of "Longview" by Green Day (one of the greatest songs ever). It's about being alone and feeling pathetic, everyone can relate, even though not everyone's experienced the specific things mentioned in the song, just like this story (except the song's a lot lighter, it's pretty funny). This was well written. Did you really write this WHILE you were drunk? It's kind of hard to believe, cause then I'd be thinking: Wow, think about how great your writing would be without being drunk! Anyways, this was good, and not biased or anything. You're not saying drinking's bad or good, you're just saying it's a way out. So, yeah, I'm starting to babble. Good Job.

Happy Writing,

~W.W.Krandomity