absoloutley loved it.
where did you learn to write like that?
WOW

the line, 'my body is all pills, bulimia and fake lace' and 'kerosene joy' excellent... indescribable... love the entire poem.

this is amazing. i can't believe i'v never read any of your stuff before... love it. favorites for you.

This is REALLY good.All I can say is I like your creativity and what you did with destroy.

again, love the repition. love your style. gruesome and rhyming, no less. simply whore-ible.

"I never falter/(but my love's been spent)/and everything's uninnocent)"

God, that leaves a good taste in my mouth.

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Oh wow, this is amazing, great work!

-- ilovethis. i absolutely a d o r e all of your writing, it's fucking brilliant. this poem is no exception. really, truly amazing. please, please keep writing.

-.bfota

I am so jealous of your poems...No, seriously...

my my.this is wonderfully written.

Dress them all up in kerosene joy.. the sarcastic, slanting, sharp rhyming sends you jagged all the way through, and I adore that. A poem that hits you in splinters. All it needs is a guitar solo. Perfect.

This was really fast and pounding. Lotta bitter all wrapped up in this, fantastic fantastic job.

I liked this! I love the mental images it brings to my mind.

Keep writing!