   Ryukoji 2006-01-17 . chapter 1mystical and enticing. |
 Professor Doctor 2005-12-08 . chapter 1Pretty. |
 Patricia Louise 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Good poem. |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2005-11-24 . chapter 1oh! this was great! good job |
 Broken doll on a dirty shelf 2005-11-21 . chapter 1This made me think of snowflakes...is that normal?! Lol-but really, it was again, an excellent piece. I really need to extend my vocabulary...I don't know how else to describe your work!
Harlequin~Please fix me... |
 BelovedOfAslan 2005-11-21 . chapter 1 It had an awesome sing-song rhyme to it almost, GREAT! I loved it! |
 ADSpencer 2005-11-21 . chapter 1OH, nice poem! I really like how it ends. |
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