 Ivy Ether 2005-11-26 . chapter 1Aw, what a sweet story lol. I loved it, really funny stuff. The story could have come off as hokey, but you kept it (fairly) short and sweet. Those crazy Bulgarians...
Nice pacing of the story, and I didn't think there were any parts that were boring. It kept my attention the whole time, which is surprising, since I have a small attention span :)
I would like to read your other zombie story tho, since this one was so good. |