 Wingless Cherub 2005-12-08 . chapter 1If this is a song, I love it. Even if it's not, this poem is really something else; something wonderful. I haven't read anything like it on this site before (I think). Really great work. It was the title that attracted me, and how strangely the summary was typed, almost like a poem itself, and all one word (since there aren't any spaces (in the summary)). I like that you repeat lines, repeat words; it makes the whole thing flow really, really well. I don't even know what to say, how to convey all my praise. Though I tried, I can't find anything to critisize. In fact, I want to go read this poem again and again... (and again). |