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| Erin A. May 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI look forward to the developement of this story, but I do hope that in a future chapter your readers will get some background on Abby and her relationship with James. It was a little confusing to start off at that particular point. |
| RainShadow2005 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseIt took me a while to find time to see about this story, but now that I have, I found I enjoyed what there is of it. This has potential, as long as you don't fall into the usual "pregnant-teenager story" standbys. I am nervous about how her parents will take the news now, but at least her boyfriend wasn't a jerk about it. This story looks like it could go somewhere so I hope we will see another chapter soon! Take Care, RainShadow2005 |
| Simply Marie 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseanother nice beginning. even though its only the very start, i like where this is going, and how you can already see how both of them feel about the situation, that she's scared to tell him, but he will be there for her no matter what. extend this! xoxo, Simply Marie. |