this is fantastic. very well done, and i hope i can count on you to keep the chapters a-comin. it flows beautifully, and the vocabulary seems fitting for the time period it seems to be in (which you haven't mentioned, but it is easily assumable). i encourage you to keep up the good work.

I really like the style and tone of voice in this; its sassy but also slightly Victorian, which is a really interesing combination. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.