hah, yet another great accomplishment. just so you know, i'm addicted to trancending a dynasty

o i really want to read more about Lethya's past. i loved the triology! anyway update soon por favor!

This short prequel was bitter sweet but it works well with TAD. You did a great job on this. I love it.

You know, I may seem soft but there were some parts there that made a tear drop fall. The whole sibling-rivalry thing... it makes me want to read TaD all over again. I've already read the trilogy about... five times?

Pagbutihan mo, good luck!

.o-o.Syrith

I love the last Rye-Laise exchange, with turnabout. Probably the best few lines in the piece; but then, I'll suck up anything TAD from you. =P

I really really love your story telling! Hey you should update TAD even if it takes forever between updates..I have noticed if you just publish a bit it gets you inspired to do more. But again love your story like usual!

PS: Oh, i am jaymes by the way, your old fan from TAD. Sorry about the confusion.

Once again, you've done it, JadeWing. Another fantastic story. In fact, I'd say this is a 19 out of 10. I really love how you used the tension between the twins, and their insecurities, to keep up the plot. =^-^=

Shine on, beautiful!

--a plot-and-sugar-happy Kohikari*

Oh, I like this. Dark. I like the different perspetives...

I'm being slightly scared of my brother, though.

poor lethya TT^TT

luved the story though!it's kewl cuz it's like a fanfic based on ur fic! ^^; keke

neway... luved it! ^_^