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Mrdarcylover
2006-08-17
ch 4,
abuseI really hope you update soon!! This is a great story
Murphy's Lawyer
2006-03-31
ch 4,
abuseWow! This is such a great story! This is why I hate reading stories from the Just In section though. Then I have to wait for people to update! But I can't help it! Please update soon, you have a real knack for this. I could really believe the whole scenario.
Mrdarcylover
2006-02-25
ch 3,
abuseGood storyI hope Hannah isnt going to get her heart broken.
RainShadow2005
2006-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey, RainShadow2005 here!

I am posting this anon so that you can remove it after you read it, because it isn't really a review. I plan to give you a review soon, but for now I was just trying to find a way to answer your question. You don't have an email address, so I'm doing it this way and leaving you the option to be able to delete it afterwards.

Just to answer your review, no there is nothing missing from the story. The last post ended at the end of a scene and the next one started at the beginning of a new scene, some time later. Had the two scenes been in the same post, they would have been separated by a page break or other sign that time had passed. I wanted to lead up to the question about Clayton and then leave the rest of the convo to the imagination of the readers, but I guess I didn't pull it off in a very reader-friendly way. Sorry for the confusion.
dorydafish
2005-12-02
ch 2, anon.
abuseYAY!!

this chappie was pretty cool

nice to see a different point of view...

keep posting regularly

DDF X
messy
2005-12-01
ch 2, anon.
abuseO i want more!
Nessa03
2005-12-01
ch 2,
abuseInteresting, YES! lol..keep writing!
Melody
2005-11-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOoh, this is a great beginning! I like Hannah and Derek already! Please update soon!

M
dorydafish
2005-11-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseYAY!

Another cool story!

We love jocks!! (we as in my brain and my body - they are kinda separate at times - man i actually sound ike a weirdo, i'll stop) LOL!!

IVE DECIDED THAT MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THE STORY IS DEREK!! jus coz of the fact that hes a jock and is probly well fit and coz i happen to like guys like that. I mean come on for rele hu doesnt like guys like that.

I actually like the style of writing that u are using in the story coz it makes it much more easier to understand than ppl that write in all flowey kinda language...um and yeh

O but one request can i have regular updates and/or longer chapters. That would b cool coz i hate it wen authours make u wait ages for the nxt chappie and then u forget wat happened in the last story.

Apart from that v gd story and update real son!! :P X
Eye Heart Music
2005-11-22
ch 1,
abuseI like your story alot,please update soon!
Siren's Paene
2005-11-22
ch 1,
abuseWow. Hannah must have more hours than normal people do to cram that much into her life.

I think the formatting ate some of your full stops and commas. An interesting beginning, though. I like Hannah already––not vacuous, down-to-earth and serious. Keep writing!
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