I really liked this one too- damn your a good poet. As far as helpin me with my writing- whenever you have time, my email is garden_gnome_ki11er200@ y a h o o . c o m I'm workin on a song right now, and I got complete mental blockage. Its kinda bringing me down a little.

I absolutely love this. The imagry is magnificent as always. I can certainly relate, and what a perfect metaphore. Always a pleasure reading. Brava! Brava! Bravessima!

~Hip

I can tell you're getting better with dark imagry in your descriptions, its wonderfully despairing.