   Ryukoji 2006-01-17 . chapter 1wow, unique and creative |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2006-01-12 . chapter 1Reminds me of the White Lady at the Ren-fair last year! Lovely! Good job! |
 Pheobe Meryll 2006-01-10 . chapter 1Very very nice, I love the flow. |
 Professor Doctor 2005-12-08 . chapter 1That was weird. |
 BellonaFlayreRiver 2005-12-03 . chapter 1it makes you think. i really liked this, even though it seemed really short. lovely. |
 Patricia Louise 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Good poem. |
 ADSpencer 2005-11-28 . chapter 1Nice poem. Now go review some of my stuff before I pester you to death, dorkette...lol |
 Broken doll on a dirty shelf 2005-11-22 . chapter 1The image I got from this was rather disturing...sorry, let my imagination get the better of me as I read this and I came up with some creepyness...but wow, this was great. I really enjoyed this.
Harlequin~Please fix me... |
 HHHHHHH 2005-11-22 . chapter 1It was nice, and it flowed well. Keep writing. |
 All Alone With Her Thoughts 2005-11-22 . chapter 1Wierd, but really good at the same time. ~Rowan |
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