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| Jorda K Terre 2006-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis is brilliant. I started to read and couldn't stop until the end. Good job. |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHey...i like this...it's seem cute rather than conceited, lol. :-) |
| Runic Binary 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was cool! It was all...oh, I am so awful at reviews. It was compelling. There! Compelling, that's it. And I mean it, I didn't just pick a random word. I wish I could write poetry like this. Both the poem itself and the way it describes writing. By the way, thank you so much for you wonderful review on Bad Dates. I love it when people actually give a thoughtful review. I will be writing more about these characters...in fact, I'll be posting something later today. Hint hint. (Kidding!) Really, thanks for your input. :) |
| Rachel-Jane Kensington 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseA-M-A-ZING. This poem owns. I def. have to post it somewhere, like on my myspace or in the front pocket of my binder. Totally kicks it and owns the sock drawer. sweetness sweety ;)-aspen |
| burning kisses 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusei remeber this poem from so long ago. when i read it in bible. it so cute and fun. way different than your other poems just because its not so deep i love it. "i can braid threads of your tears" so imageryish. WOW |
| Devil Dairies 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseWow... I'm speechless... Not olly did it capture my attention, it shows your style of writing you do =P Kool! |
| fairEtales 2005-12-31 ch 1, | abuseGOOD JOB! KEEP IT UP! ~ELH |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really really like this. |
| lyss 2005-12-04 ch 1, anon. | abusei love this! its like such good imagery! i think you should show this to everyone before you show them the rest of your writing because it really tells them about you and your writing. And then they wont get scared! jk! they wont be scared specially if they read your romatic one! ok, love yoU! |
| Erin 2005-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey Naomi! I promised that I would review your stories/poems at least a couple times, so count this as my first. I love this poem. It is so cute and it kinda reminds me of Dr. Suess...I dunno...But it doesn't sound too cocky. I like it...Wish I could write like that!~Erin |
| Thareth 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abusenice. i like |
| Lady Glass 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this, definitely something that is best read aloud. It all flows very well and I thought that the way you made yourself sound a bit cocky, it gave the whole thing a bit of humor, while it still seemed, not exactly dark, but just a bit spider-webs and witches cool. I loved it! Excellent job. Much love, Lady Glass |