Great poem I loved your word choice in this one, also you painted a picture in my mind like this was all happening. Great Job!

~Nick~

Hey, thx for the review. This poem is very good. Very emotional and its really easy to get lost in it and start whispering the lines under my breath. Which is a good thing. I'm going to read your story She has Fallen, eventually. Those 110+ words are intimidating. + Check out Two Lanes.