More mush but you have an excellent way of exploring traditional views on masculinity. Crying is something we perhaps take for granted in today's society. Humanity indeed suffers because ot it.

Well done,

Maxay

i agree, if you're ashamed of crying, which is a normal emotion, then you might as well be ashamed of being angry or happy, everybody cries sometimes, great poem

I like this poem. I like the way you arranged the words.