That was good! I liked your description through the fic, and how you described their feelings. The way you put the clock into the picture makes the emotions in the story easy to understand and imagine. This was great! Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade

...This is a beuatiful piece of literature. the imagery and the feelings of the protagonist is sublime and its just the right length (i think) for a story of this nature. well, its actually more like a poem than a story, in content i mean. sometimes the prose are a little awkward though.

Beuatiful! (did i spell that right..)^_^J.M.Collins

Interesting start, and Akuji sounds rather yummy. -^^- Heh, wow...I liked the beginning of this, hopefully this isn't it...I hope to see more soon!

Harlequin~Please fix me...

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pretty in that disturbingly eloquent way.

~* noelle