|Reviews for nude|
| vampiric-happenings 12/15/05 . chapter 1
i loved it. very graphic. very good.
| Decollage 12/10/05 . chapter 1
Frightening, beautiful-graphic and pixelated-lust.
The format coincides remarkably. Brilliant.
| Unready 12/9/05 . chapter 1
"shows her/va/gi/na/"reminded me of ee cummings, in a way. excellent poem
| flaming.footprints 12/4/05 . chapter 1
WOW. I. Love. This. This is brilliant and beautiful and erotic and heart popping. Many Ooh's and Ah's. Kudos.
| in tesseraction 11/28/05 . chapter 1
in its CONCISENESS (something tells me that's not a word)
and just the right points and details are there
| a lonely september 11/28/05 . chapter 1
this was awesome. i have hardly any comments except that you rock&that it's on my favorites.
| blacktearsofinnocence 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. It sort of pulls me under a bit. (in a good way)I like the last stanza "Oh, it pays, You buy, You leer,You use, You delete" Good job and KW!
| hey maria 11/26/05 . chapter 1
Sad in a bold, sharp way. Don't know if that makes sense, but there it is.
| always gats b y 11/24/05 . chapter 1
adore the ending. nicely written. very, very nice.
xo - Rei
| AllyCred 11/24/05 . chapter 1
i like it, extremely well written.
lots of loveAC
| myno 11/23/05 . chapter 1
pretty like blood.
| beti213 11/22/05 . chapter 1
I like how you space this... also the flamingos... it's just one of those innane cheap images that adds to the bitter edge in this poem. I love it... a non-moralistic critique of pornography. write on.
| like a lover 11/22/05 . chapter 1
"shows her/va/gi/na/amidst guitar strings/and lowers studded hips to the floors."
(& the rest was amazing-awesome-seductive too)
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 11/22/05 . chapter 1
I'm never a good judge at this type of poetry, but in my opinion, its great. Lovely, keep it up.
| account not in use 11/22/05 . chapter 1
wow. that was brutal, so beautiful...esp. the last stanza.