i loved it. very graphic. very good.

Frightening, beautiful-graphic and pixelated-lust.

The format coincides remarkably. Brilliant.

"shows her/va/gi/na/"reminded me of ee cummings, in a way. excellent poem

WOW. I. Love. This. This is brilliant and beautiful and erotic and heart popping. Many Ooh's and Ah's. Kudos.

Shavo

so

graphically GORGEOUS

in its CONCISENESS (something tells me that's not a word)

and just the right points and details are there

this was awesome. i have hardly any comments except that you rock&that it's on my favorites.

Beautiful. It sort of pulls me under a bit. (in a good way)I like the last stanza "Oh, it pays, You buy, You leer,You use, You delete" Good job and KW!

Davida

Sad in a bold, sharp way. Don't know if that makes sense, but there it is.

adore the ending. nicely written. very, very nice.

xo - Rei

i like it, extremely well written.

lots of loveAC

pretty like blood.

I like how you space this... also the flamingos... it's just one of those innane cheap images that adds to the bitter edge in this poem. I love it... a non-moralistic critique of pornography. write on.

"shows her/va/gi/na/amidst guitar strings/and lowers studded hips to the floors."

EXCELLENT.

(& the rest was amazing-awesome-seductive too)

I'm never a good judge at this type of poetry, but in my opinion, its great. Lovely, keep it up.

wow. that was brutal, so beautiful...esp. the last stanza.