way to punch someone poetically! best kind of revenge in my opinion.

Jeez, I would hate to see the other creepy dark corners of your mind. Good job, I'm glad the rhyming wasn't lame and cheesy or I'd have to hate it. I do not think like this, too bad because that means I couldn't write like this either. Oh well.

It's always the quiet ones who are dangerous. I should know I'm one of the quiet ones. It's relateable, considering most of us want revenge at some point. Nice work.

Thanks for the review of my story "Consequences of a Happy Ending".

Twilight Starr

(insert the evil laughter here.)

Someday, when you rule the world, would you torture some other people I know?

yeah, i have that problem too. the line, "they call you cute, they call me strange" really stood out to me.

yeah! Go girl! Kick that b*tchy girl's ass! WHO!... ahem.. sorry about that... I do sometimes think like that and you got all the feelings out for me! NICE! *thumbs up*

Dark, eh? If you like disturbing poems, read mine: 'Laughter of Hell'. Anyway, great short poem, nicely done.

Oh, wow... WONDERFUL! Truly real, Octello. I'm glad you have put up another chapter. You are my friend, after all. Hey, I hope you have a good weekend, it is five days long. I have to go now. Jade

PS Forgot one thing, I'm in the middle of three bets with my uncle. The first one, who can eat the most pumpkin pie for Thanksgiving. I, of course, will win. Wanna know why? Because my uncle is doing a bet with my sister to see who can eat the most cranberry crud. Ha! The second bet, who can stay up the longest. In this possistion, I am like Kat if I have a lot of caffine. I have already had two cans, so I'm hyper. Just think how many I'll have once we reach nine. So, I'll win this one as well. Plus, we'll be watching two movies, and we can't read. Lights out, too. I have a large imagination, so I'll be able to think the whole time. We're watching Shrek and Indiana Jones.

Final bet: Who can sleep in the latest. Let's just say all of my family are great at sleeping in. My uncle, thing is, has bad gas. And, my soon to be aunt is great at sleeping in as well. I dunno about this one.

Okay, have to go now. Seeya next week. Have a great vacation. Jade

Simple, but powerful.