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| Jenny Rebel 2005-11-23 ch 1,  | abusefirst of all, i like typing in all caps. secondly the stanzas shouldn't be separated by those lines. it distracts the reader from the poem. third, YOU SHOULDN'T BE SO ** PEOPLE'S WORK!we're all just trying to write our best here.. that's why we have this whole fiction press thing. give up the whole bitchy critisism.. it's not very flattering for your writing. but other than that i liked it.(see you should end a review on a positive note) |