I loved the story .
Can't wait for an update ! (:

You haven't updated in a YEAR! Finish the story please? Many people would be pleased:D

Umm, I love jay! So much better than jonathon but is rachel going to end up with jay or jonathon? Anyways im a sucker for goths and emo style people n.n

So I don't know if I ever reviewed this when I originally read it, but I was just looking through my favourite stories and I remembered this one and... well, whatever happened to it? I mean, if you just stopped writing it, I get it because I do that all the time (it's a serious issue, I swear...) but I just remember so desperately wanting to know what happened next in this one...

Will I ever know? =P Just wondering. Because this is a great story. And I usually hate stories that have two separate types of narration. But I think the whole poetic thing you have going on from Rachel's POV every now and then (like the bit at the end of this chapter, obviously) makes up for it somehow. You make it work. But... yeah.

Just curious. =)

will this be update nytime soon.?.
i really enjoy both this and the other1 of ur stores.
Please update soon.!.

I love it, you left us with a cliffhanger, but really I can't wait til you update, soon, I hope, and yes I read ur profile and understand ur busy, but I can still hope,...right? read ya later

Hi, Great story! Will you continue to write? Rachel and James are great together.

Please please update this awesome story as soon as you can. I haven been reading this story for the past 2 days and I have literally been sitting on the edge of my seat. I want to see whats going to happen next. Please update as soon as possible. Thanks!

GAH! please update soon...the suspense is killing me -.- Way to end it right then and there =/

I hate you, it should actually be illegal to leave off on such cliffhangers!
Please please please update soon, the suspense is killing me!

are u ever gonna update?!?!

I'm really confused as to what just happened, did she just leave her house? Did she leave Jay there?

Pretty please update this soon!

its good so far. its kind of like the cinderella complex. but its good!

i am totally stumped! i love this story so much! i really hope you get back to it, the characters are so interesting and you write rachel without the self-pity that all other stories of abuse do. and i genuinely couldn't figure out who i liked more out of the boys - when usually the authors intentions and preferences are obvious. you write an amazing story, truly! keep up the good work luv! hope to see more of it

Oh my god. o.O This is getting weird. D: