Wow, this was excellent...suicidal poems seem to be getting...to 'childish' lately. Especially those who are not the least bit "disturbed" try to write it, and those that are make themselves out to be "the victim". I may not write about it, so I'm not sure if that comment makes me hypocritical...anyway, this was wonderful. I loved the last two lines...so much meaning.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

An assasination. I love it. Short, sweet, and to the point. Good stuff! ^^