|Reviews for What Do You Want?|
| free-to-dream15 12/19/05 . chapter 1
Seriously love it! I think it is so one of my favorites of yours now! lol..keep up the good work!PS: Thanks for reviewing...sadly i am not even allowed to see my cousin...only her mom and brother are..yea...well ill read more later!
| Plinky 11/23/05 . chapter 1
Interesting idea - as I read i felt as though I was clutching at straws until I got to the end.
I like the way the idea develops through the poem, and the contrast at the beginning is good.
Lovely poem. Keep writing!
| Naibz 11/22/05 . chapter 1
I speak of fantasies
You call me silly
I speak disgustingly
You encourage me
You’re just a little boy
Growing every day
Where are you going?-these lines say something. you speak disgustingly and he encourages you. desgustingly I am interpriting as sexual dirty talk? the fact he encourages this just shows he just wants to have fun as he laughs at your fantasies of something more serious. I could be wrong.
now as for the poem/song. it flowed pretty well and captured how you will be submisive in anyway just tom please him. good piece.