Seriously love it! I think it is so one of my favorites of yours now! lol..keep up the good work!PS: Thanks for reviewing...sadly i am not even allowed to see my cousin...only her mom and brother are..yea...well ill read more later!

Lovely poem.

Interesting idea - as I read i felt as though I was clutching at straws until I got to the end.

I like the way the idea develops through the poem, and the contrast at the beginning is good.

Lovely poem. Keep writing!

I speak of fantasies

You call me silly

I speak disgustingly

You encourage me

You’re just a little boy

Growing every day

Where are you going?-these lines say something. you speak disgustingly and he encourages you. desgustingly I am interpriting as sexual dirty talk? the fact he encourages this just shows he just wants to have fun as he laughs at your fantasies of something more serious. I could be wrong.

now as for the poem/song. it flowed pretty well and captured how you will be submisive in anyway just tom please him. good piece.