Aww! So cute! Cool format

Beautiful imagery, lovely piece. So powerful in so little words. It's good to see you back! Thanks for your review!

i got really drawn to how you used your words here... and i noticed that the poem somehow managed to form some kind of object, to me it looked like a rose.. how did you do that? amazing, i tell you! i liked this part the most...

"Her soulOpeningHer heartEntwinedin hiskiss."

great work! keep it up! hope you could get some time to read some of my works too! God bless! :

Cute...keep it up and thank you for the reviews

This is short and sweet. And there's even a kinda shape to the whole poem. There's a very powerful emotion here, but i think the 'dark desolate staircases" should be changed a bit, maybe; the poem is generally positive, i think, so the desolateness of the staircases kinda loses it. BUT i think it's beautiful. One of my favourites. I like this.