wow. i liked this one a lot. it made me search for something deeper than what it appeared to be on the surface. good job.

This is good, isn't everyone all that wishful sometimes? Don't we wish that life was so simpful that we'll carry on living it, every single day. I bet everyone could relate to this, and thats what makes your poetry even more beautiful.

Beautiful, just beautiful. The bolding in the last line works so well. Great piece! QueenVixta

Humm...I don't know what I think about this poem...I want to say inspirational, but I'm not sure if it really was...I dk - undecided.

Brilliant..you did a really good job with this Keep it Up