|Reviews for Defeated Darling|
| poetrypal 12/4/05 . chapter 1
wow. i liked this one a lot. it made me search for something deeper than what it appeared to be on the surface. good job.
| Cool-Ruzz 12/2/05 . chapter 1
This is good, isn't everyone all that wishful sometimes? Don't we wish that life was so simpful that we'll carry on living it, every single day. I bet everyone could relate to this, and thats what makes your poetry even more beautiful.
| SayIt'sWrong 11/28/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful, just beautiful. The bolding in the last line works so well. Great piece! QueenVixta
| from beneath the bell jar 11/27/05 . chapter 1
Humm...I don't know what I think about this poem...I want to say inspirational, but I'm not sure if it really was...I dk - undecided.
| Random-Idiocity 11/22/05 . chapter 1
Brilliant..you did a really good job with this Keep it Up