Thats...lovely! I'm not one for these types of poems, but this makes an exception, this one is well done.

keep on writing!

Wow...this is one of the best poems I have read in a while. I like the imagery with the shadow in the first stanza. Nicely done.

short and sweet (been ages since I last read your work) Haha...I changed my pen name since then. Keep on going and nice work as usual.

Beautiful. Very lovely.

simple yet touching! great work of art! at first it some poem dedicated to God but when i reached the last stanza, that was when i realized that this was of a lovers poem... nice work!

you have to improve it! good luck! :

Ahh, love at in a kiss! I think I follow this meaning. Heh, ps. if you do not remember me, click on my name and see if that wrings a bell.

WRITE ON! ( Sincerely,

That Crazy Chic Who Changed Her Name Way To Much(

This one is pretty nice, you know. I like the last line ,especially; i tihnk it's very meaningful. It kinda ties up the whole poem very well. And the descriptive voice is incredible. I like this.