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| Meekah 2005-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseWow! So sad. Makes me wish I still danced. An excellent short piece.Great job! |
| Needa S 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, my, ya almost made me cry. This is soo beautiful. Excellent piece of work. Keep'em coming. |
| little-kayleigh 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful.That's al I can say, really beautiful. |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWow...truly poignant and beautiful. I'm on the verge of crying. *sniff*This is really an amazing piece, I mean, most people would lose their loved ones to others, but you included cancer as the killer, and that aches the heart even more. Excellent. ~~Trinity |
| Beautifula 2005-11-22 ch 1, | abuseMade me feel the want to cry. Your story was beautiful and perfect. |