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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this is so sad but I love it so much. The repitition is lovely, it works so well and the meaning of the poem is gloriously sad and horrible. Best Wishes Holli x |
| Laurel 2006-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis guy seems to suck but he also seems to help ur writing GrEaT poem keep it up! |
| LeoOsaka 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseInteresting here, the deplore and through, kinda threw me off a bit. But it's a very interesting concept! It kinda remind me of the darker songs from Amy Grant! I don't know why but it does! |
| amy hobbes 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abusetrue love is hard to find. go with it. that's where true happiness lies. |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseAw this was a really good poem. I enjoyed it so much. :) |
| Romania 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abusethis is sort of depresing, but I like it |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuse"I'm not allowed to love you."- I think that is such a powerful statement; putting the whole forbiddon fruit topic aside I think love flurishes through hate like a weed. When your not supposed to love something you usually can see the beauty of the thing all the more clearer. Well done, this really spoke to me about sociaty. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |