if this was all based off of a comic then i'd love to read it. anyway, i think that this story is kind of cute.

...thats just funny!

and here i thought that this story was about the baby. *shakes head* i guess i was wrong. anyway, good plot so far. *evil look* but can it continue?

the king kisses his male friend while his wife is sleeping right next to them. i love it. *giggle*

It's done?! That's it?! :dies: It was soo good too!! I really really liked it though^^ i would never be abe to make that much happen in just 4 chapters and then that was it. My stories go on forever x.x Good job!

Aww, I still think that Lori's mom is a total and complete bitch... anywhoo and the prince person didn't have to act like that either though i guess it is understandable, but who is this character in the forest? i think i may have an idea ^^

::gasp:: W-what just happened... Kaono is dead and it's all because of her?! Gin had better kill that evil person so slowly that she wished she was dead!! I can't believe that she would do something like that... LEMME AT HER! :Hitori-Hoshi's character's pull her back at once:

Nakate: G-gomen nasai!! Kanojou wa chotto shouki de nai!!

Eiji: Ano, hai hai!! Hontou ni, demo chotto!!

Hitori-Hoshi: (sigh) well i don't want to hurt these two, so please update sooN!

Aww!! Kaono! I love you! The queen is an evil bitch!! Off with her head!! muaahaaha!! Though I really hope that she didn't see the exchanged kiss... she's crazy enough as it is ^^; Yay!!Onto the next chapter!!

I'm liking the plot ^_^

I'd love to see more description in this, I'm having a hard time picturing it.

starts out so utterly sad!! *sniffles* i can only hope that it's not so depressing throughout the entire fic. and i can't wait to see...hope you update quickly!!