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Reviews For: Fallen Deeply into Water Lust
XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
AWSOMLY WEIRD! you should write more.


xKristie Mariex
Prisoner-11 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
*raises eyebrows* Huh, weird, but cool! I want to read more!
Lightning Storm 2005-12-02 . chapter 1
I like this story. You won't be coming after me to murder me ruthlessly with a plastic spork, lol. Great imagination!!
MustardTofu 2005-11-30 . chapter 1
well well well...lol guess who i am well yea i'm not goin to criticise cause you're in my skl you could easily kill me... jus browsin your work and i must say its very original in a dirty way ( its not an insult ^_^") anyways you know me so thats all.
hi-tanner85 2005-11-24 . chapter 1
i really did like it. love it almost. im just a bit lost at whats happening. but maybe thats whats supposed to be happening at first. i will continue to read because it has intrigued. good stuff. keep writing.
Cat Meeeow 2005-11-23 . chapter 1
wow... i like it. its really got something that i can't pinpoint just yet, but i can tell that it'll be great. update soon!-Cat
TheCrazyChickWithTheBlondeHair 2005-11-23 . chapter 1
Dude...okay...well the abuse scene was confusing at the very first, because of the suddeness of the attack and the location...but I got it...I'm just slow sometimes...so helpless the victim is...you must continue...by request...
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