wow...i really like this... so often children are called "it' but i think a child has as many rights to be called a person as a fully grown adult does. i liked your perspective on this..great!

button nose x x

Amazing... most people would just say, "Oh, that's so wrong" without giving a reason, much less one as powerful as this one. Great job.

~Leeona Trance

This is a great piece. You really through me off there. I love the way you use the words the second time. Perfect.

unique. very, very unique. thought provoking... and clever word use. nice.

xo - Rei

this one confused me sorry

powerful and sad... i'm not sure i compeletely agree (im pro-choice, but i don't think it's right).. but the poem is still beautifully done

could confuse people if they do not read the second part... nicely done