This is amazing...I wish I could write this well!

I really liked it, but I do have one question: is the 'we' really just one person, kind of a schizophrenic type thing? Very good, I really want to learn more about the wallpaper in the room.

Absolutely fascinating. And partially eerie. And somewhat brilliant to the eyes. In truth, I find that it captivates me; I shall read it again, for it seems that I could do nothing else.

Have you read The Yellow Wallpaper? this reminded me of it a lot. its really good.

This story sort of reminded me of the Yellow Wallpaper, which is a horror story by Charlotte Perkins Gilman. It's all about this lady who is sick in this room with yellow wallpaper, and there is something sinister behind it, which ends up being her dead soul pr something of that sort. It's an amazing story, and you should read it if you haven't already.

--Rock My Socks

It was enchanting. It provided a new, different world with different ideas, and it really made me think. But, it was also a little confusing- but only in small ways that I filled in for myself. This is so truly astounding. I also liked how you kept mentioning the bees- it made the story flow well.