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| E. A. Tetje 2006-01-16 ch 1,  | abuseVery well put. I like this... of course I can't remember having ever read anything of yours that I have disliked... You diction is terrific.~Beth |
| a lonely september 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuse-blink- wow. that was a very beautiful peice. amazing detail. |
| Lady of the Moonless Night 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. This is why the Lord came to us that 20 years ago. I like the way you start each line with "The Heart"...we are God's people. We are but vessels holding great emotion of love and grief. Again...a beautiful poem and also gives everyone something extra to pray for this Christmas.~Lady of the Moonless Night |
| maxnotevoltage 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful - I picture it as a prayer, and it is a very sincere, emotional prayer. Your imagery is amazing... That's all I can really say! God has truly blessed you with the gift of poetry. -- J.max:-) Happy Thanksgiving! |