Reviews for Terms of Service - FictionPress.com

Ofinterest 2007-05-10 ch 1,	abuseThere are too few stories where the main protagnists are recognizably men and not boys. This one is the very entertaining exception to the rule. Thank you for this.
K.sey Kay 2006-04-21 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed seeing some back history for these two :3 Though now I'm kind of curious about what else happened between this short and /Ravens, Owls and a Nightingale/. ^^; I really enjoy your writing style.
Pysche 2005-12-21 ch 1,	abuseThis was so cute! I loved how all it took to get those two in bed together was just getting them in the same room alone. Lol they were so obvious. The minstrels were cute, too - funny how Daynar thought they were fine to be with though he had qualms about sleeping with other men. Maybe because they were travelers and he didn't have to deal with them every day like he did with his soldiers - or maybe because they were so small and pretty it was like being with a woman. Hehe... just kidding about that. Anyway I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!
Briel 2005-11-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseupdate joy! really liked the story, these are two memorable characters. one thing threw me out though when Sorel thinks that Daynar is "way younger" I didn't think the "way" fit the time, seems more of a modern this world saying thinking. i really like all your writings, thanks for updating.