I work in a drive-thru. And sometimes all the metaphors in the world come down to a jerk in a pick-up truck, who doesn't care about 'have a nice day'. Infreakincredible, isn't it?

I like this. I certainly like this.

This feels so sardonic, perhaps maybe ironic. Sarcasm in writing always appeals to me, you don't have to understand something in the way the author does to appreciate literary black humour. Nice job.

(in response to your last review; so true. Irony isn't ironic enough often.)

heh, work in fast food too? nice write.

so much the same~ it's your style i guess, so open and with such a sense of profound sophistication~ good work~

keep writing!

and then?...

AND THEN ANDTHEN ANDTHENANDTHEN

...and then?